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Post by sreemanta30 on Nov 15, 2012 18:11:55 GMT -8
Interviewer: Hey Beast do you have couple of words for your opponent at your debut match at nhf?
Sreemanta: Maybe its my debut but i don't care i know i can kick his monkey ass all over nhf arena because i am not a superstar,i am an ass kicker.
Interviewer: But your not yet a superstar your still a rookie.
Sreemanta: Sreemanta smiles and suddenly start beating the interviewer.
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Post by garland on Nov 15, 2012 18:53:17 GMT -8
Dude did you even try to do good?' This is generic and flat out piss poor
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Post by sreemanta30 on Nov 15, 2012 19:04:16 GMT -8
No i don't have to and i am not a talker when i get a wrestling match with you i can kick your ass but when it comes to make a promo ahhhh you can beat me on that...................Now on sunday i want a match with you to shut your mouth and i will teach you a lesson about respect..................Show me some respect!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by garland on Nov 15, 2012 19:15:18 GMT -8
Dude I'm not in character. I'm trying to help you by giving you criticism. Now i understand your character is not a talker but why even have him talk let alone reply with that plain answer to those questions. You can write a promo and not have him talk. You can describe his actions instead of having him speak. Show us that your character is The Beast. Because right now i don't see it.
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Post by joker30515 on Nov 15, 2012 19:24:50 GMT -8
Respect c'mon don't rip off Punk.
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