Post by joker30515 on Dec 14, 2012 14:29:55 GMT -8
Ok so I'll be going more in depth in terms of promos. I'll do a quick in for my character Ariel and explain after.
Scene fades in a familiar warehouse where various carpenter utensils are laid out on a table along with some sawdust that is next to a coffin the light is fairly dim the cameraman falls to the floor obviously startled by a voice coming out of a room
Ariel: She's a beuty isn't she made her myself along with this.
Ariel moves revealing a tombstone with the name Shank engraved the cameraman backs up as Ariel resumes speaking
Ariel: I don't plan to kill him..the only thing dying is his title reign.
Ariel pats the coffin
Ariel:That's what she signifies. I plan on getting a title shot by any means possible and when I do Shank and his reign as NHF Champion..
Ariel fixes his gaze directly at the camera as it zooms in on his face
Ariel: Will be welcomed into this coffin aswell as my Workshop--of--Pain.
Scene fades out with static on the screen
Okay, lets start with the italicized parts. Whenever you begin a promo you always start with a description if the scene along with any actions taking place just like I did for example:
Scene fades in a familiar warehouse where various carpenter utensils are laid out on a table along with some sawdust that is next to a coffin the light is fairly dim the cameraman falls to the floor obviously startled by a voice coming out of a room
I described the warehouse where it took place along with the lighting and the cameramans reaction to the voice. Usually you begin a promo with the "Scene fades in". Descriptions are generally easy and you will get better in time try to describe the area in a general aspect don't go to in depth like what kind of floor tiles it has just the man things.
Now the middle italics:
Ariel:That's what she signifies. I plan on getting a title shot by any means possible and when I do Shank and his reign as NHF Champion..
Ariel fixes his gaze directly at the camera as it zooms in on his face
Every new thing your character says should be seperated by an action which are placed in italics aswell. No need to elaborate pretty self explanitory pretty much.
Word
Action
Word
Now to the ending:
Scene fades out with static on the screen
Whenever you finish you always describe what is happening as the promo ends only case there was nothing but static in the screen.
Moving on to the bold your character name while on the promo should be bold if there is more than one guy then change the color of text.
Now to the content itself try to stick to your gimmick Ariel is a carpenter so I use a warehouse for my promos and wooden objects as symbols. Even if your character Is an asskicker describe his actions or get a manager to speak for him. Also don't take WWE things in your promos RESPECT in promos is just plain wrong one last thing have fun with it.
Scene fades in a familiar warehouse where various carpenter utensils are laid out on a table along with some sawdust that is next to a coffin the light is fairly dim the cameraman falls to the floor obviously startled by a voice coming out of a room
Ariel: She's a beuty isn't she made her myself along with this.
Ariel moves revealing a tombstone with the name Shank engraved the cameraman backs up as Ariel resumes speaking
Ariel: I don't plan to kill him..the only thing dying is his title reign.
Ariel pats the coffin
Ariel:That's what she signifies. I plan on getting a title shot by any means possible and when I do Shank and his reign as NHF Champion..
Ariel fixes his gaze directly at the camera as it zooms in on his face
Ariel: Will be welcomed into this coffin aswell as my Workshop--of--Pain.
Scene fades out with static on the screen
Okay, lets start with the italicized parts. Whenever you begin a promo you always start with a description if the scene along with any actions taking place just like I did for example:
Scene fades in a familiar warehouse where various carpenter utensils are laid out on a table along with some sawdust that is next to a coffin the light is fairly dim the cameraman falls to the floor obviously startled by a voice coming out of a room
I described the warehouse where it took place along with the lighting and the cameramans reaction to the voice. Usually you begin a promo with the "Scene fades in". Descriptions are generally easy and you will get better in time try to describe the area in a general aspect don't go to in depth like what kind of floor tiles it has just the man things.
Now the middle italics:
Ariel:That's what she signifies. I plan on getting a title shot by any means possible and when I do Shank and his reign as NHF Champion..
Ariel fixes his gaze directly at the camera as it zooms in on his face
Every new thing your character says should be seperated by an action which are placed in italics aswell. No need to elaborate pretty self explanitory pretty much.
Word
Action
Word
Now to the ending:
Scene fades out with static on the screen
Whenever you finish you always describe what is happening as the promo ends only case there was nothing but static in the screen.
Moving on to the bold your character name while on the promo should be bold if there is more than one guy then change the color of text.
Now to the content itself try to stick to your gimmick Ariel is a carpenter so I use a warehouse for my promos and wooden objects as symbols. Even if your character Is an asskicker describe his actions or get a manager to speak for him. Also don't take WWE things in your promos RESPECT in promos is just plain wrong one last thing have fun with it.